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قديم 04-02-2007, 05:36 PM
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تاريخ التسجيل: May 2005
الدولة: Egypt
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Dear Ibn Kharsan ..

May I call your attention to some really important hints .. ?


My brother ..

First of all ..

It's vice versa .. your great words are more than a crown on my head and better than a medal on my

chest .. and I'm the one who should be greatly taking pride in knowing you .. shouldn't I ??


My dear ..

You really wanted to express your feelings .. and u did .. but with lilttle mistakes .. so let me figure'em out ..


( 1 ) ..

You wrote .. " your respond for " ..

You should've written .. " your response to " ..


( 2 ) ..

The subject pronoun ( I ) .. should always be written in CAPITAL .. not small ..


( 3 ) ..

You wrote .. " I'm pride " ..

You should've written .. " I'm proud .. or .. I take a great pride in konowing you " ..


( 4 ) ..


Your final sentence should be like this : -

" May Allah enables me to meet you soon " ..


And I say .. [ It's my pleasure and my honor my dear ] ..


Wa assalum Alykum Wa Rahmatu Allah Wa Barakatu
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